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College Application

Discussion in 'Denied Applications' started by ziwwwi, Feb 15, 2020.

  1. ziwwwi

    ziwwwi United States Level 1

    Dec 30, 2019
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    IGN: loservillee

    Discord Tag: loserville#7541

    Current Grade: 12th grade

    Previous Applications:

    Any Bans/Kicks: none

    What is your motivation for applying for College?: High eduction for my character in hopes of becoming a doctor, more specifically a brain surgeon

    How should a College Student behave during class?: Respectful towards their elders and peers yet confident enough to be apart of everyone during class discussions. A college class should not be a place full of distractions, students are there to attend class in hopes of having a successful future.

    How should a College Student speak to School Staff?: Once again with respect. Not as if they have been friends for years. Nothing inappropriate as in foul language.

    You see another College Student being immature and possibly harming school property, What do you do?: If the students seem too be unstable or dangerous is anyway, I would find a teacher or any other school staff so they could deal with it. If not then I myself would go up the person and kindly tell them to stop. I would also tell him about how these action could affect him in many ways.

    Do you understand you can be kicked from College and placed back down to Grade-12 for acting immature and disruptive?: I do understand. It would only be fair for the teachers and the staff, college isn't a place for student to act like children. Nobody wants to sit in a working space where other students are being immature and disruptive.

    IC Information

    Character Name: Clementine Tiana Helvete.

    Characters Date of Birth: May 25th, 2002.

    Gender: Female.

    Character Description: Clementine would be a small hot headed girl. Standing at 5' 3, she would not be very intimidating, but boy could she kick those kneecaps in at lightning speed. She could have black straight hair with light pretty eyes.

    Year of Graduation: 2020.

    High-school Achievements: A few reward tokens.

    Age Graduated:

    Backstory: Clem 'Anka' Helvete was born in Gothenburg, Sweden, in May 25th, 2002. She was a small girl who was raised by a relatively kind family. Her mother, Annika, was a sweet, beautiful person who worked at a post office. She would frequently spend lots of time with Clem, doing activities such as watching the stars, drawing, doing homework, eating, drinking, breathing; matter of fact, she did just about everything with Clem. Her father however, was a big alcoholic, and would abuse Clem and her mother on the daily. Clem's school life was very boring, she got good grades, hung our with her friends, rinse and repeat, in short, she didn't have much fun. Where she lived in Sweden did not have the best education, so her parents thought about moving to Germany- and they did, they moved to Frankfurt, Germany. After that, they were nearly bankrupt after moving, and paying for a private school for Clem. Unfortunately, Clem's father's alcohol addiction got even worse, and one day he left and never came back. These series of events put Clem's mother and herself into a state of sadness they had not experienced before. Annika was poor, she had at least two jobs, and they were in the heart of Frankfurt. Even then, Clem was now a victim of bullying in her school, which made life so much worse, she came to the conclusion that that was enough, and she would do jobs to get money to help her mother and herself. Two hellish years later, Clem and her mother scraped the bottom of the barrel for enough money to go to Karakura, Japan for one of the best schools in the world, as well as a pristine job offer for her mother. This would make for the perfect opportunity to restart their lives and finally be happy. Once they moved there, Clem was 13 years old, and she already liked the place. Unfortunately, the place had a history of crime, and it was pretty sketchy at night. Clem eventually got a job and her mom worked at a real estate agency for a sustainable income. Finally, they were happy.

    IC Letter:
    Dear College Dean, Hello, my name is Clem Helvete, my friends call me Anka, and I was born in Sweden. I currently know 3 languages, Swedish, German, and English, all of which I am perfectly fluent in. I have been attending Karakura High School for 5 years now, ever since I was 13 years old. Ever since then, I have longed for a higher education, more than high school that is. I would like to pursue my dream of becoming a brain surgeon, so I may live a happy life and sustain myself and hopefully help my mother get back on track with her life, as we have experienced many hardships in the past few years. Your college has truly inspired me, and my success in Karakura High School recently has proven that I am ready for the responsibilities of becoming a college student enrolled in your school. My behavior is of the finest quality, and I am not one to be distracting during lectures, as I am very interested in the learning experience at your school. I am looking forward to working with you and the staff here, and I thank you. Best regards, Clem Helvete
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  2. WiffyBanter

    WiffyBanter United Kingdom Level 119

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    Your backstory and letter are detailed and long, yet the rest of your application is not, I advise you to look more into going into more detail with your other responses.

    If you have any questions or concerns please DM me on DISCORD;