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Discussion in 'Artistic' started by gRimZ_YT, Jul 12, 2019.

  1. gRimZ_YT

    gRimZ_YT United Kingdom Level 5

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    okay so i recently got back into drawing- i tried copying this from a friend od mine, any tips, pls no criticism. just feedback
     
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  2. Aether117

    Aether117 South Africa Level 49

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    Big thing with art my guy. You have to have criticism. There is nothing in this world that doesn't involve criticism. If you want to improve, you need criticism. Not only tips and feedback. Other than that; great work. Needs improvement, but it's great.
     
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    flimbo United States Level 25

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    okay but why is it great? why does it need improvement? if you’re gonna talk about how criticism is necessary or nothing doesnt involve it, you kinda have to do more than just say it’s great or needs improvement.....
     
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    Aether117 South Africa Level 49

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    Fair point. It's great because you can see what it is. You can see that they put effort into it. It needs improvement because:
    A. Look at the fingers on the left side of the page. They are very blocky.
    2. Her body is a bit big. I'm not sure if this is on purpose for the character, but I'm putting it out there anyway.
    D. Her hair is everywhere. It's too fluffy.
     
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    i'd recommend working on proportions, like the legs, and work on the hands (the peace sign one is pretty good, however i'd give it more shape. drawing hands that are just in the picture and not holding anything and stuff is hard for a lot of people) the detailing is pretty nice, so good job on that. i'd also recommend giving the hair more flow.
     
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    pinkings United States Level 12

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    buddy, you’re correct when you say all art needs criticism, but you’re forgetting the word constructive in there. don’t just throw out things you want the drawing to look like, especially since both fluffy hair and larger body types are things seen in both character design and real life. arguing that “tips” and “feedback” won’t help is a horrible way to introduce someone into art. if anything, blatant criticism makes me unmotivated to change my art, meanwhile tips and feedback are motivators for drawing

    this is very nice, especially for someone who is just coming back to art!!! the shadow on the sailor skirt is something u do NOT see often !

    if you truly want tips, i’d say search up some art tip accounts on instagram or pinterest and go through them. they (most of the time) help me out, and i feel as if you’re just getting back into art—you’ll enjoy them too!!! if you want personal feedback, i’d say find something online about making your lines more natural and less stiff. while the linework done in your drawing is very very good compared to anything i could do (as i never clean up lines!!), the hair appears somewhat unnatural with its bone-straightness. while it’s good to make shapes when drawing hair, it should flow with the body just as well!!!
     
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    gRimZ_YT United Kingdom Level 5

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    Thank you everybody for the kind words! It means a lot and I will take what you all said into consideration!
     
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    YouWatanaba_ United States Level 7

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    this is really cute !
    the coloring is very nice looking, though I recommend making it a bit cleaner looking, it’s not as rough to look at that way. i do like the light-ish colors though. The pose is really cute too, even if the anatomy needs a bit of improvement- but even I’m not great at that. I like the hair as well, it looks pretty nice. Something id recommend, kinda not drawing related, but take the photo from a different angle. The way it’s taken kinda makes it looked a bit warped, so maybe straight above or something that will make the photo more accurate.
    For anatomy and coloring improvement tips n stuff, googling them and such helps, especially with specific things (hands, arms)
    Overall, for just getting back into art, it’s very cute and I like it ! hopefully some of the uhh tips help
     
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    Aether117 South Africa Level 49

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    What? I never said anything about tips and feedback not helping. I just said that all art needs criticism, not ONLY tips and feedback.

    I by no means meant to come off rude or aggressive. I apologise for making it seem this way. It's good art, my guy.
     
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    Totoro_Sam Australia Level 291

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    wait whats the difference between criticism and feedback.... is it that one is inheritably more focused on the negatives?
     
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    Missunderstood Nigeria Level 91

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    I can't say much since I'm no Bob Ross, but - try working on the anatomy, especially the torso area, and define your joints a little bit. Try starting off with a sketch if possible, before the final product. Try adding shading to your drawing. Hope to see your great artworks in the future !
     
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    gRimZ_YT United Kingdom Level 5

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    Thank you! You see- I don't know "art terminology" like "anatomy", because I never really got serious into it, but I now I want to.
     
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    Aether117 South Africa Level 49

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    The anatomy is basically the structure of a persons body...
     

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