Denied
You don't say.
Your parents tapping a rhymical tune to you does not give you the sudden ability to become talented at music. It's just like me watching a film about a hitman murdering someone, it won't make my child into a skilled hitman, will it?
It's a backstory, not a present-story...
Denied
You don't need to randomly capitalize words
This /me is useless to me. It has to be revolving around school, and it's very short.
This party is written very immaturely
You can re-apply in 7 days
Denied
The application should follow a simple black and white format, but after training myself to read this, it has several mistakes and very bad /me's.
Denied
These /me's that are 3 words long, won't cut it.
You have lot's of grammar mistakes in your backstory, you didn't proof read it
This is mandatory, also, the grammar here burns my eyes
You can re-apply again in 7 days.
Pretty unsure about this application, so I'll put you on trial for 5 days.
I'll be watching your OOC actions and IC actions.
If you are good for 5 days you are permanently added, if not, you are fired.
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