Good luck on your app!
From all the watcher family
Just dm me if anyone's a pain in the family!

no shot, he deleted it LOL

hey gangster i have bajillion denied apps its okay, if your denied, always try again. overtime you'll improve dw abt it

Hey mate, not everyone starts off perfectly nor can everyone write in a fluent or proficient matter. You are doing great and you should embrace your application without letting any narcissistic, ignorant, and egotistical individual(s) affect you in a negative manner. You shouldn't take anyone's negative opinion at face value as it's your own style.